This story while very warm and fuzzy has some issues in the way the story was told. While the potential for a warm-story about local churches helping refugees probably sounded good in the story meeting, the story of the family does not seem very fleshed out. I think that the main problem is that this story lacks some structure of a begining, middle, and end. Also, I got confused tryign to keep the characters straight, whether that is my fault or the writer’s is up for debate.
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